There is a follow up story “lost property - found” for those wanting to see how it panned out.
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Lost Property
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Rubadubdub
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Re: Lost Property
Only my own personal opinion, but the second part got too complicated. I like sweet and simple!!!
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PetreVanClause
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Re: Lost Property
Nice nice story. The follow was bit confusing. Probly me no understanding!
Re: Lost Property
Thanks for the feedback. I thought it was a simple idea, but obviously not, I’ll bear that in mind for future stories. For the record…Rubadubdub wrote: ↑November 21st, 2022, 11:21 pm Only my own personal opinion, but the second part got too complicated. I like sweet and simple!!!
Lost property is where you go to find something that is missing. Sophie found her long lost mother, but only because of her childhood memory of her mum’s raincoat. They all lived happily ever after.
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yellowgirl
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Re: Lost Property
yes I would love to read the follow up story lost property found
Re: Lost Property
Working in it now (because I am a sucker for when people ask me to write more). Do you want anything specific added in to the story?yellowgirl wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2022, 9:39 pm yes I would love to read the follow up story lost property found
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