Jane's Journey (Pt 4)

[Jjai]

What makes this story so different to most and all the better for it, is that it focuses on a personal interest, not just someone meeting somebody else who amazingly just happens to like plastic rainwear, then they all live happily ever after.

There must be loads of material you could write about Rainyjane.

Keeping it a secret for a while and the near misses of being discovered or the problems of finding a personal location to wear her raingear whenever it rains.... the list is endless !

I do hope you carry this story on Rainyjane, it does seem to have a personal insight into the storyline which makes it all the more authentic.

[hotwilly]

Jane & you like rainwear - thats two connections

Obviously written from the heart with passion & feeling

Wonderful story

[Domino]

The Jane in your story may be entirely fictional, but you have certainly brought her to life. I think the comments we've all made should convince you that you definitely have a talent for writing.

Domino

[Taffmac]

Hi Jane, just wanted to say how much I appreciate the work that you have put into this very exiting story. I would love to read some more if that is possible. Many thanks.