Re: The story about a girl and a mac part 2
Posted: March 25th, 2010, 6:03 pm
Hi
Good story so far, a little long winded maybe but its starting to get there! The best way to take this story forward would be to stick to your own ideas, it's your story after all! As you can see from the comments so far everyone has thier own likes and you'll never please us all! Personally the description of the 2 rubber clad girls riding around on a scooter was as good as it gets, I'll keep those images in my mind for a long time as I have and old Vespa in the shed awaiting restoration, and I have one of the grey rubber suits as well!!
Good story so far, a little long winded maybe but its starting to get there! The best way to take this story forward would be to stick to your own ideas, it's your story after all! As you can see from the comments so far everyone has thier own likes and you'll never please us all! Personally the description of the 2 rubber clad girls riding around on a scooter was as good as it gets, I'll keep those images in my mind for a long time as I have and old Vespa in the shed awaiting restoration, and I have one of the grey rubber suits as well!!