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Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 2nd, 2013, 2:43 am
by blackmacjay
Comme il faut!
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 2nd, 2013, 3:07 am
by mason
Spellbinding ... can't wait to see what happens next
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 2nd, 2013, 9:09 am
by Domino
Same here. Well done, Rainy Jane.
Domino
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 3rd, 2013, 2:45 am
by rcl
Really enjoying this, can't wait to see how it evolves. I second mason's comments on pt 1.
Keep it coming!!
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 3rd, 2013, 6:23 pm
by kulshan
Substance over form, and there is a lot of substance here. This is a suspenseful story and well written. Thanks for investing your creativity in this and providing us with a captivating story. Keep the installments coming!
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 3rd, 2013, 9:57 pm
by PVC Raincoat
Great start in building the foundation to what looks like will be a terrific story. It takes a lot to plan a story line, develope characters and make it flow. I know how much effort you are putting into this. I'm really glad to see people are taking the time to comment, every writer needs that feedback. Keep it coming.
I was half way through another story last week, my pc crashed and I lost it all.
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: June 9th, 2013, 5:04 pm
by hotwilly
Loving it - heading to Part 3
Re: Jane's Journey (Pt2)
Posted: July 4th, 2013, 2:28 am
by Jennifer987
Still very much enjoying your story Jane.
Jenifer