Jane's Journey (Pt2)

[blackmacjay]

Comme il faut!

[mason]

Spellbinding ... can't wait to see what happens next

[Domino]

Same here. Well done, Rainy Jane.

Domino

[rcl]

Really enjoying this, can't wait to see how it evolves. I second mason's comments on pt 1.

Keep it coming!!

[kulshan]

Substance over form, and there is a lot of substance here. This is a suspenseful story and well written. Thanks for investing your creativity in this and providing us with a captivating story. Keep the installments coming!

[PVC Raincoat]

Great start in building the foundation to what looks like will be a terrific story. It takes a lot to plan a story line, develope characters and make it flow. I know how much effort you are putting into this. I'm really glad to see people are taking the time to comment, every writer needs that feedback. Keep it coming.
I was half way through another story last week, my pc crashed and I lost it all.

[hotwilly]

Loving it - heading to Part 3

[Jennifer987]

Still very much enjoying your story Jane.
Jenifer