Story Corrections and Changes

[Deleted User 5375]

I’ve had a couple of PM’s from friends asking if I have changed stories after they are submitted. The answer is - yes I do. If I see a spelling or grammar problem, or someone points something out to me, then I do silently fix it without mentioning it.

In my Lost Property - Shiny Puffer mini story, someone explained that Sophie was about to wear thing-length PVC boots and a midi-length PVC skirt. In their mind this would look wrong, she needed to have shorter boots, but in the end I went very kinky and raised her hemline and made it a mini skirt, oh and took her knickers away for downright naughtiness. But don’t worry readers, I didn’t make her go out in public dressed like that!

JM

[PetreVanClause]

I need to improve my enlish reading. I dont understand this stories.

[Highshine5]

No. I dont get the plot either.

[Cherie]

It’s not a story. I think he is just explaining that he might change parts of an existing story that he wrote so you might find on second reading that it is slightly different. Correct me if I’m wrong Jelly Man?

Cherie x

[Deleted User 5375]

Spot on Cherie! I’m glad someone understands what I post.

By the way, the above statement is NOT a story for anyone who is unsure.

JM

[Kinkykiwi]

How come a story that is not a story is at the top of the story list? A brilliant piece of literature! Excuse my sarcasm, just find it funny! Ill crawl back into my rubber lined shell now. Night night!

[rubgum]

How come a story that is not a story is at the top of the story list? A brilliant piece of literature! Excuse my sarcasm, just find it funny! Ill crawl back into my rubber lined shell now. Night night!

It's a short way to the top, if you are a writer of great talent.